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Wednesday, 17 June 2020

Very Short Sentence: The Alien Ship

On Wednesday the 17th Of June we learnt about very short sentences. I have put two of them in my story and I'll see if you can find them. Comment if you did find them.

It was cold and desolate. The wind howled as I tried lighting my fire. The flames kept sputtering out before the gas had time to rise. Suddenly, a giant light turned on and a very surprised cow was lifted slowly into the air until it was gone sucked into a weird and complex ship. It flew over sucking more and more up until the whole paddock was gone. I stared in disbelief as it came above me and I scattered running as fast as I could into the woods.


I could hear the alien ship ruffling the trees searching for me. I breathed heavily. Soon the sound of the ship dissipated and it was gone. I sighed in relief as I came back out of the woods. That was until the ship came out of camouflage mode and picked me up as I screamed in terror. I fired my gun harmlessly at the ship trying to make it let me go. That was my fatal mistake. The light shut off and I was left dangling in the air trying to flap my wings like a bird. All went black.     

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