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Friday, 17 May 2019

Jungle Survival

Jungle Survival



Splash. A drop water landed on the baby's nose. The baby giggled with happiness. They were crossing the great river. But it all went wrong. The water started to spin around until they looked like water tornadoes, the canoe went crazy bucking and swerving. The canoe flipped and everyone got dropped into the river. And everything went black.


The mother and baby woke up in a jungle. Mysteriously The two other men were nowhere to be scene. The baby started to cry.

That was five years ago when the adventure had just started. Now we were surviving. Resourcefully they built a house out of wood and leaves to keep them warm. They befriended the animals and started to stay alive in the jungle.

Now they are ready to try find their way back to the city where they were headed through heaps of streams where crocodiles lingered and snakes camouflage as grass.


It wasn’t easy to survive in the wilderness but they did. But one day something terrible happened.


The mother screamed out in pain. The son came running over to see that a snake had bitten her and was encircling her slowly, tightening around her. Ineffectively, The son tried throwing rocks but it only made it worse. Soon she was so enclosed that he could only see her head.


Sadly, He cried knowing that she wasn’t going to live. She coughed out one last word saying “ go “. After that he ran as fast as he could to find life. Luckily, soon he saw a road going towards a little town.


He ran to it as fast as he could crying with grief. Quickly, he ran down the road people staring at him as he went. A few men came up to him asking what happened.


He told them what happened and that they had got stranded and how is mother died. He choked on the words when he said them. They stared at him with sympathy.

“Come on ” they said as they held out their hand. We can help.

The End

2 comments:

  1. I really love your story it is so descriptive and I actually found it very interesting. Your story kind of reminds me of the explorer which is a book that is really good. There is nothing that you need to work on cause it is good. from Olivia

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    1. thx olivia that is really nice I really appreciate the comment.

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