Liam and the iron fist

Liam And The Iron Fist

It was in the morning that I died. I didn’t know that this was going to happen but it did. I was walking home when a man walked from behind the alley way walked from around the corner up to me. He was tall lean and all of his clothing was black, black gloves, coat, glasses and hat. He walked straight up to me and disappeared in a flash only leaving a small black skull ring. On the ground where he had stood mist particles were waving through the pavement.

I looked down at the ring it had a skull wrung through it and red glowing eyes. It looked alive as if it had its own soul. The black mist rose up and flew into the air. quickly before the I ran after it I grabbed ring and put it own. I followed the mist with my eyes and saw it disappeared into my dad's apartment I rushed through the doorway and saw the exact same man that had appeared next to me and my dad was laughing as if they were old friends.

My dad saw me and the ring that was on my finger and his smile evaporated. His head turned towards the guy in the coat.” did you give my son that blasted ring that would attract the monsters WHAT HAVE YOU DONE”. I had never heard my dad shout like that.

Before I could register what was going on, the side of the wall exploded, in came in what looked like a mutant dog its fur glistened red with glowing blue eyes it stared straight across the room straight at me its eyes fixated on the ring that the man in the coat gave me.

My dad rose his eyes full of hatred because of the mutated dog and the man. He made a gesture that I didn’t know but the wolf definitely did. It scowled and charged my dad.I panicked and the ringed transformed into a giant gauntlet. It fitted perfectly on my hand. I was shocked but I quickly took action.

I charged to my dads aid and jumped in front of my dad. I attacked the wolf it was a stupid idea I know believe me but I needed to save my father. Crunch, I had never been happy to hear the breaking of bones. The wolf now lay on its back. Searing pain pierced my backside. The mysterious man was standing behind me with a knife, I just had time to think in my mind dammit as I blacked out.

Hell?

I woke up my eyes flew open, I took in the surroundings. I was in a dark chamber cobwebs covered the walls with icicles hanging from the roof. The walls were old and had cracks in them. The wall used to be a colour of light brown but had faded to the colour of grey.

I checked to see the wound that had pieced my body, nothing was there! And what else that surprised me more was that I had abs! I panicked. What was happening. I didn’t want to be captain america!

Something knocked on the door. The door opened and what came through was the most revolting thing I had seen in my life. And considering what had just happened this week this was the weirdest. A ghoul had stepped through my doorway and was standing in front of me. I realised that my normal clothes were still on unscratched.

The ghoul looked at me with those white eyes. It gestured to me to follow it. I jumped out the bed that I had woken up with and followed the ghoul. I looked at the ghoul’s feet and saw that the ghoul had no feet and was hovering above the ground. We wound round corners walked down corridors. Just when I couldn’t bare it any longer we reached a door. The ghoul got a key out of its... its… back… gross and used the key to open the door.

I didn’t know what to expect. As soon as the door opened I bolted weaving through ghouls and running through souls. I reached the other end and broke through the door. I felt pain but I didn’t have time to feel the pain I kept on running until I got to a door that said exit. I burst through the doorway into three girls.


They had confused looks then they grabbed their weapons. The first girl had a spear the second held a dagger and the third had a… a… talking sword? Was I hallucinating or was it really talking.” hey who this dude.” the sword asked. I nearly fainted.
“ I’m Liam.’ I replied.
“Well Liam what are you doing in hell?”her tone told me to answer truthfully
“I died and woke up here.” he answered. I told them the story from when he got the ring that transformed into a weapon to when I woke up here.”then I met you guys.” he finished. We all lowered our weapons.
“You should’ve gone to Valhalla.” Jenny said.
“What’s Valhalla?” he asked
“Where people go if they died heroically.”
“Which I did but I went here.” Liam said glumly.
 “Well we’re here on a mission so if you could shimmy over that would be nice. The girl with the talking sword said.
“ hey I want to come I don’t even know what to do.’ I replied
“ well if you have a weapon you might be helpful.’ said the fierce girl with the spear.
They explained what they were doing and why they were here.” So your saying you came in this place on purpose!!” I was starting to think they were crazy and out of their minds to come here.” I don’t intend on leaving my father down here all by himself.’ answered the girl with the talking sword? They all ran back into the corridor and continued back down the path they he had came. On the way they explained who they were and where they had came from
“So your telling me that there is another place that a girl on a horse can take you. He remembered briefly before he had died a girl on a horse was flying towards me her hand outstretched.” hey I remember before I died I saw that lady on the horse. But why did she not take me. I also remembered the flashing lightning before dying.” well it won’t matter right now we have company!’ from around the corner came a legion of ghouls they had swords in their hands and were charging towards us. I panicked, immediately my ring expanded into the gauntlet that I had used to take down the wolf that had threatened me and my dad. My anger exploded and the walls did too.

Water busted through in tight waves around me and my friends, heat seared my back as fire exploded through as well. Soon all the remains of the ghouls lay on the ground. None of the girls had needed to lift a finger. They stared at me in astonishment.”wow.” I said as I nearly blacked out. Georgia propped me up against the wall and feed me what tasted like my favourite food cinnamon buns. Instantly I started to feel better the exhaustion faded away bit by bit as I ate.” what is this stuff.” I asked as I munched it down.”ambrosia.” replied Scarlet a smile on her face. Alarms were blaring and so we had to get going.

Again they wove through corridors and once we ran past a person that looked like he had just got out of bed. A giant wolf cry sounded close. Jenny cursed.”GARM.” yelled another female voice said. We ran, ran and ran round the corner and stopped behind a corner. That was the mistake. The giant wolf came bounding from around the corner and bowled into me slicking me all over my head. Soon I was soaked head to toe. The voice that had called before came walking round the corner too. She looked straight at as and grinned.”oh i’m guessing you're the ones who Garm sniffed out.” she said smiling in a cruel way.
“We’re here to bargain.” Georgia said
“Now, what for?” she replied.
“My father.” Georgia replied.
“Well what would you give that I want?” she asked.
”me” he said. I rose.
“Now why would you step up for them Liam.” she smiled.
“How did you know my name?” I asked.
“I’m you're mother of course.”she said as if she had delivered great news.
“Say what now.” I said in disbelief.
“And yes you can have your father but I will take my son in exchange.” she said.
“No we are not leaving without Liam.” I said.
“Well then have it your way if I don’t give me my son you don’t get your father.” she replied. What was she doing Hela was my mother, we had only known each other for a few minutes and she doesn't want to leave me behind. She grabbed my hand a ran with Jenny and Scarlet trailing behind. The angry roar of Hela and Garm sounded through the halls we didn’t stop when we got out. Georgia made a portal and we jumped through. We found ourselves in some giant hall where tons of warriors were having dinner. I didn’t have enough to say uh oh. Now we were on the stage explaining what we were doing. They pondered. Well this is different.” does Odin wish to intercede?” he looked at the throne dejectedly.” wel…” a booming noise sounded through the halls of the slain and a man appeared on the throne and boomed.” ODIN WISHES TO INTERCEDE!” Odin said. Georgia ran up to Odin and hugged him.  Astonished I stared up at Odin/Georgia's Dad. He saw me and smiled.” Hela has allowed you to stay” said Odin.
“Wait so am I a god” asked Georgia.
“Yes daughter” he answered
“So that's why I didn’t feel tired every time I used the portals” she said. Wait what god am I? She asked.
“God of portals of course” said Odin.
“Ohhhhhh pretty obvious huh” Georgia said. So do I get to come to Asgard with you? Georgia asked.
“Yes darling” Odin replied.
“Yes!” she said. Bye guys I hope i’ll see you soon, and with that she disappeared into golden dust with Odin. I looked around to see the stunned faces of the dead warriors gathered around in their sets.” Well that was interesting” said a man with another guy who was pouring him some water.
“What do we do now” a random warrior said.
“Back to bed” the man said. As I was walking around in confusion the man who I had seen pouring water ran up to me.”Hey wait up” he said.
“What “ I said.
“You need to know where you are going” he said. He told me where I was staying with the other girls I had went with. What this weird place even was why I was here well I guess I already knew that and everything but ya anyway. So he showed where I was going and in a few minutes we were standing in front of a doorway that had my name on it?” Go on” he said as if it was my room.
“What?” I asked confused.
“Go on its your room” he said as if he had already explained(which he had).
 I walked inside slowly as if I were slow motion.” Wow” I said with amazement. Never in a million years would I find myself in a room like this I said.“Well i’ll leave you to it, bye” he said as he sped off.
 All around me was the best room I could’ve dreamed of, with a king sized bed a huge sony TV screen fitted with all the consoles games and pc’s I could’ve asked for.
“OK” I said as I jumped onto my king sized bed.
A huge swimming pool was sitting next to a large tree in case I wanted to swim. I had my own bathroom kitchen and photos of me when I was little. I grabbed the nearest one slowly. It was me with my dad when I was little and was having my birthday. I smiled sadly” I miss you dad”I said.


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