Date
20/09/19
Topic
Word count
236
My Writing
Once there was a tiny little boy he was a lone boy who had no home and had no family. He would travel over the land searching for someone anyone but there was nothing. He was very sad and lonely. He had no one had couldn’t find anyone but he still searched… till one day. He saw something on the horizon. A woman. The boy ran towards her as fast as he could. As he got closer he could see her beckoning him towards her. As he got to the lady he went to touch her. Immediately his hand passed through her. The boy looked up in surprise. The lady was flickering and suddenly disappeared. All around him a giant force field rose around the world. He looked up and saw “Lab Experiment Z” he fall to the ground tears streaming down his face. His life was a lie he was being kept as an experiment. He went to the edge of the world he punched the wall and the force wall disappeared. All around him a giant wall rose up from where the force field was. There was a small hatch at the very top of the ceiling, a tiny hole. His face turned to determination. He grabbed the wall and started to climb. Slowly and steadily he climbed to the top. He went to grab the hole his hand slipped. He started falling and black.
The End
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