Kia Ora Drew, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
What a spectacular job you have done with your post. I really like how you’ve incorporated so many colours. Its eye-catching for your readers and will definitely entice more comments and reactions from your readers so keep up the great work.
You’ve included some amazing facts! I particularly like your last one. I didn’t know that some people can see colours when they sing! I wonder what that would be like. Do you think it would be a different colour for each different note or something different entirely?
Perhaps you could include more facts about the singer in the other boxes in your profile page. What other things do you know about New Zealand’s Lorde? Maybe you could include some of her songs or her favourite colours.
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Kia Ora Drew, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteWhat a spectacular job you have done with your post. I really like how you’ve incorporated so many colours. Its eye-catching for your readers and will definitely entice more comments and reactions from your readers so keep up the great work.
You’ve included some amazing facts! I particularly like your last one. I didn’t know that some people can see colours when they sing! I wonder what that would be like. Do you think it would be a different colour for each different note or something different entirely?
Perhaps you could include more facts about the singer in the other boxes in your profile page. What other things do you know about New Zealand’s Lorde? Maybe you could include some of her songs or her favourite colours.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon